mrkomiks's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Unfortunate Girl:Lapse]

Where was salad fingers? In that windmill?

The style you used in this movie is painfully unoriginal, as holyth1rt3en mentioned a few reviews down from mine this style has been started and worn out by David Firth.
As far as the animation goes, it was mediocre. Mostly just motion tweens and a few frame by frame segments of a worm popping out and back into the ground. The lip synch isn't anything to flaunt either, as it again was a carbon copy of David's and didn't even match the voices in any way.
You did use the blur filter effectively a few times, and the sound was pretty good. I will say that voices were exceptional, and in addition to that I liked the way you animated that windmill, it was chilling.
Those cut scenes, however, such as the one that had with girl with squiggles for eyes (oooh how unsettling) were pretty unnecessary and poorly done. You have potential and it would show itself more if you made something original and stopped imitating successful artists, since as we all know you can never copy someone and be better than them.

TheFabs responds:

To answer your question about if salad fingers was in te windmill. No, those worms coming in and out of the ground were his PENIS. So that's where salad fingers was.
Hoped this helped! :]

But seriously.

[1c The Hideous Plot]

That was really good!

You did a great job on this. The animation was very fluid, and though this is the first movie I've seen of your series I'm already somewhat into the characters.
The length was great, and the plot was very well laid out.
Decent voices too, and sound effects.
I don't have much of any criticism to give you, except maybe work on more of a variety for the voices, you acted them all didn't you.
Maybe work on different voice or get other people to act for you.

teamexcellent responds:

Heh, cool, thanks.
Interesting about the voices thing tho... there's actually four of us doing them :P

[Rant - Wapanese]

Hahahaha

Other than the fact that I agree with you FULLY,
You talk fast, I love your accent. Especially the way you said Naruto.
You used a great style in this, and it went well with the audio.
Once thing I might suggest is that you work on positioning drawings so they don't jump around.
Great job on this. ;D 8/10 5/5

benanderson responds:

As this was made with MSPaint and Windows Movie maker it was rather difficult to get the drawings the way I wanted, but in the next video I'll hopefully improve :)

Glad you like it ^^

[Madness preview]

You should

Try making something original.

Sunshaft responds:

Maybe I ll try
xd

[Agnry Rant]

You rant about originality...

...then you use the "shoop da whoop" face? I'm hoping that was supposed to be ironic.
Still, this was mildly entertaining. It'd have been much better if the sound quality was higher, and you actually tried on the voice acting.

Omenator responds:

OK then, thanks for voicing your opinion

[tom, i am truly sorry]

Wow.

This eats it.
How bout you do something original, pepsiclock.

PepsiClock responds:

thanks for unanning me tom... hope ur doing good

[Egocaptured]

I think you all are overdoing it...

I'm getting sick of seeing Egoraptor's name everywhere.
Although I thought the flash was good, I liked the style and some of the jokes made me laugh.
You should do more movies like this, but not about Egoraptor.
IN MY OPINION
So an 8/10 for the flash. Maybe if there was a bit more action.

ImpendingRiot responds:

We satired the fan made Egoraptor movies, we never attempted to be an awesome style movie, I think its safe to say this was something different in its own.

[BioShocking]

Ehhh

You seem like an egoraptor wannabe... I like the drawings in this, but I think the voice acting could be more... ENTHUSIASTIC. He didn't sound too pissed for someone who just got ebola.
8/10 just cause I thought the voices could have been better. (:

ShadowMaginis responds:

thanx for the score, i will work on my voice acting ..

[like a duck (colour)]

Trippy

I love your FBF, and how everything morphs into something else. Most Flash's transitions are pretty boring but yours are something else entirely.

TheBoogley responds:

Did you read that everyone, "something else entirely", that can't be good... or can it? hmm...

[V-Day 2008: Summer Lady]

Hahaha

The shot of her on the bench got me. This is awesome. I dunno how your mom'll take it but a 10 all the same.

TommyVF responds:

Thank you! Haha, glad you liked it,
Thanks for the 10!

>T