Where was salad fingers? In that windmill?
The style you used in this movie is painfully unoriginal, as holyth1rt3en mentioned a few reviews down from mine this style has been started and worn out by David Firth.
As far as the animation goes, it was mediocre. Mostly just motion tweens and a few frame by frame segments of a worm popping out and back into the ground. The lip synch isn't anything to flaunt either, as it again was a carbon copy of David's and didn't even match the voices in any way.
You did use the blur filter effectively a few times, and the sound was pretty good. I will say that voices were exceptional, and in addition to that I liked the way you animated that windmill, it was chilling.
Those cut scenes, however, such as the one that had with girl with squiggles for eyes (oooh how unsettling) were pretty unnecessary and poorly done. You have potential and it would show itself more if you made something original and stopped imitating successful artists, since as we all know you can never copy someone and be better than them.